I read your 15 minute essay and find your ideas interesting. I don’t have the time or energy to delve deeper into them right now (though I intend to buy your ebook, partly because I hope to it read later and partly because I think you deserve the support), but I wonder if TDG’s apparent foray into direct democracy is a weakness. Your book probably addresses this.
As a fiction writer, I think your ideas could be popularized through fiction. Past novels such as Ernest Callenbach’s “Ecotopia” (a largely forgotten classic) or Ayn Rand’s books (though I am in no way an Objectivist or any sort of fan of hers) show the way this could be done.